“There is a school of thought that says that the most experienced workers should be promoted to management. However, some businesses prefer to select manages based on their perceived leadership skills, regardless of how much experience they have.”
Modern day extremists often suggest how sorting the intellectuals based on how they've progressed over the period of time in the field is always a good choice. However, this is only true when the extremists are looking for brain dead labors and not for the skilled ones. Someone has correctly said that 'If you judge a fish by it's ability to climb, it'll seldom believe that it's good at something.' the statement holds true for almost every modern day field.
It has always been said and proved from time to time how experience is the most important aspect to look from for a person's ability to do his/her work. No one in the world was ever born with experience, one can could great intelligence but without the experience there's no way one can do great work.So the businesses who prefer to select managers based on their leadership skills are taking a long shot.
Skills might make one know what to do but experience teaches one about how to do.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they've
... sorting the intellectuals based on how theyve progressed over the period of time in t...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...based on how theyve progressed over the period of time in the field is always a good choice. H...
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Line 1, column 396, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...dom believe that its good at something. the statement holds true for almost every m...
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Line 2, column 117, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ost important aspect to look from for a persons ability to do his/her work. No one in t...
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Line 2, column 264, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...intelligence but without the experience theres no way one can do great work.So the bus...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...nce theres no way one can do great work.So the businesses who prefer to select man...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 58.6224719101 34% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 2235.4752809 35% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 169.0 442.535393258 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59171597633 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 4.55969084622 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39015170673 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 215.323595506 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656804733728 0.4932671777 133% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 704.065955056 34% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1398735633 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.857142857 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147344143042 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548017251555 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513597462132 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094134083445 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514900579891 0.0667264976115 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.8420337079 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 100.480337079 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.