Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won’t benefit their future careers.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
The Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in Science are very busy with their specific courses. They have to do lots of projects and practical work. Including Humanities as a part of their academic syllabus will only add a burden to them because Humanities is a completely different subject from their particular field and will not be beneficial for their future career. Therefore, I believe that Undergraduate students ( Business or Science field ) should not require to take Humanities.
Humanities is all about philosophy and human nature in which we learn about the deep meaning of life and human behaviour. While in Business and Science study, students deal with practical situations. In future, they will get a job in a particular sector. Hence, philosophy will not help in any way. Even to get capable for recruitment, what matter is student experience in their particular field. Humanities will only help them to learn about real-life situations.
Secondly, the Business and Science students have a cumbersome syllabus along with practical, project and internship, which make their whole year occupied. If humanity subject is also included, then it will only add extra bunder to students. In the First year, when students start the course, then we can add humanities or put it as an optional (elective) course for final year students who think that it can be beneficial for their future career. Earlier, in the first year, when a student has just started the course, humanities can also be included at the time. As knowledge is never proven to be a wastage. Therefore, having a brief about it, will not only help them to have broad perceptive but also not affect their future career.
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...ities can also be included at the time. As knowledge is never proven to be a wasta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 278.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20503597122 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93640873306 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525179856115 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.1056243965 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4375 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253232391871 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847577771592 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069040861085 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185571271683 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675901572232 0.0667264976115 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.