San Francisco, Los Angeles, and New York, just some big cities that come to mind when you think of the United States. From a foreigner’s perspective, one might come to the conclusion that they can characterize the society in America from the traits of big cities. However, cities are hubs of fads that indicate temporary important characteristics of a people, but not always long withstanding important ideals of a society.
Taking a deeper looking into Los Angeles and San Francisco reveal how cities hoist a lot of people who are into the latest fads. Recently there has been a surge of yoga studios, vegan friendly restaurants and eco-friendly products. These characteristics can lead someone to deduce that Americans value exercise, their diet, and the earth. However, this does not speak to all of America that boasts a high rate of obesity and a large trash consumption. It is also important to characterize what defines a “society.” If one is trying to find the most important characteristics of California, they would not be too far off from what California values. However if trying to describe all of America, this would be far from the truth.
Moreover, one must also take into account the type of people big cities attract. Cities mostly comprise of younger adults than they do families. To find the lack of children in the city and come to the conclusion that Americans do not have a lot of children would be false since most families live in the suburbs, a more family conducive environment. However, a lot of larger and big events occur in major cities, such a protests and strikes. The Black Lives Matters movement garnered more traction protesting in the city than in the suburbs and thus someone evaluating major cities might notice a significant amount of political action. While all of America might have differing opinions on the movement, its safe to say that it is something that caught the attention of the country and would be characterized as important to the country regardless of their point of view.
Given these points, analyzing major cities can lead to an ambiguous conclusion about a society. Some major finds in cities are often temporary trends that will be out of style in a couple months, and aren’t defining characteristics of a people. However, cities are large grouping points where people from a range of areas come to meet to collaborate and share ideas. In these ideas are some ideals that American people as a whole belief in or at least find importance in.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion:
...rica, this would be far from the truth. Moreover, one must also take into accoun...
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Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
...eople big cities attract. Cities mostly comprise of younger adults than they do families. T...
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Suggestion: evaluates
...ty than in the suburbs and thus someone evaluating major cities might notice a significant...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, while, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2107.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 426.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94600938967 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90288280908 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523474178404 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6802019925 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.894736842 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4210526316 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42105263158 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110133318493 0.243740707755 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344278709062 0.0831039109588 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299082136643 0.0758088955206 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724880263641 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192439734715 0.0667264976115 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.