to understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities
As the good old saying goes on “when you are in Rome behave as Romans would” meaning that behavior of Romans will give idea about roman society. But the main question is that whether in today’s worlds this will hold true because Rome being a big city will comprise of people from various countries due their career or other important things. On the contrary small towns and villages have majority of roman population which preserves its culture and religion so it would be beneficial to study smaller towns and villages to gain insights about characteristics of the society.
Earlier big city like France would give idea about French society but now as France is considered to be the global fashion hub it will contain models, designers etc. from various countries so it won’t provide true characteristics of society as small towns and villages would. Moreover over the years a new tradition of inter cast marriages has been introduced leading to a new generation who lacks in traits of either of their parents. However in towns such traditions are often opposed and follow their own ancient traditions so the chances of understanding the characteristics of society are more.
In a country like India, more than 70% of population lives in rural areas so as to understand characteristics of society it is necessary to study small towns and villages too. Due to modernization people in cities may think that their ancient practices were superstitious and follow some other customs so studying a city won’t guarantee that the characteristics are related only to that society
Big cities are likely to have majority of society’s population, also it can provide social, political and economic characteristics, but the true characteristics of society can only be understood by understanding rural areas well.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'as to', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.27652733119 0.240241500013 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.151125401929 0.157235817809 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.128617363344 0.0880659088768 146% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0385852090032 0.0497285424764 78% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0353697749196 0.0444667217837 80% => OK
Prepositions: 0.154340836013 0.12292977631 126% => OK
Participles: 0.0385852090032 0.0406280797675 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.97036126069 2.79330140395 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0289389067524 0.030933414821 94% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0610932475884 0.0997080785238 61% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.032154340836 0.0249443105267 129% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0064308681672 0.0148568991511 43% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1828.0 2732.02544248 67% => OK
No of words: 296.0 452.878318584 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.17567567568 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.58838876751 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.364864864865 0.366273622748 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.293918918919 0.280924506359 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182432432432 0.200843997647 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118243243243 0.132149295362 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97036126069 2.79330140395 106% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 219.290929204 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533783783784 0.48968727796 109% => OK
Word variations: 54.3757269049 55.4138127331 98% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6194690265 44% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 32.8888888889 23.380412469 141% => OK
Sentence length SD: 97.5820009714 59.4972553346 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 203.111111111 141.124799967 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8888888889 23.380412469 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.674092028746 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 62.2807807808 51.4728631049 121% => OK
Elegance: 2.08571428571 1.64882698954 126% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318683745857 0.391690518653 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.119613634946 0.123202303941 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0653423249054 0.077325440228 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.608959558633 0.547984918172 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156301122894 0.149214159877 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149065335409 0.161403998019 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661318463747 0.0892212321368 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.368177356596 0.385218514788 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0773468762493 0.0692045440612 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228589768798 0.275328986314 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013195426574 0.0653680567796 20% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 13.5995575221 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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