To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Development has been a never ending quest for humanity since the dawn of social awareness. Mankind always tried to take the best elements of any location and multiply them to make that a better place to live in. Humans learnt to collaborate all their efforts at one place to transform the chosen geography into a beautiful city. These efforts were carried on for generations together which also involved the values inherited from villages to preserve to characteristics of the society that built it.
Given statement speaks that study of major cities is the most essential thing in attaining a solid understanding over the characteristics of the society. But this view is absolutely negative as a society involves various elements other than cities.
Further, a city can be considered as a "consolidated form of development", but this development never occurred without the support from the surrounding villages and towns. A fruit might be the selling point of a tree, but it doesn't imply that a fruit is the whole tree. Similarly, major cities might be the most developed elements of a society but they can never represent the whole society. A city can never emerge out of no where, it is built after a numerous efforts and sacrifices put forward by neighboring livelihoods.
Additionally, a society is not a mere group of people or localities, it is a collection of numerous emotions, values and customs dated generations back. A society has various livelihoods ranging from a countryside to a metropolitan, all these together define the characteristics of a society.No single element represents whole society on its own. A good dish consists of various ingredients such as variety of spices, different kinds of vegetables. But one can never judge a dish stating that a single vegetable or spice is so good or bad. In a similar fashion, no one can understand a whole society by studying major cities alone.
Moreover, one might find it helpful that studying villages gives a better understanding on a society's characteristics rather than cities. As, villages are the ones which preserve the customs, characteristics of any given society, as cities accommodate a huge number of visitors and people who settled in the city but do not represent the key characteristics of that particular society.
Finally, studying the major cities of society might set a benchmark to understand the characteristics of the society, but it cannot reflect the whole society. Heart might be the most important organ in a human body even that requires assistance of other organs in the body. Analogically, cities might be the most developed elements of a society but that doesn't imply that they operate independently and act as the whole representation of te society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... be the selling point of a tree, but it doesnt imply that a fruit is the whole tree. S...
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Line 5, column 434, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...society. A city can never emerge out of no where, it is built after a numerous eff...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: No
...define the characteristics of a society.No single element represents whole society...
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Message: Consider replacing "In a similar fashion" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e vegetable or spice is so good or bad. In a similar fashion, no one can understand a whole society ...
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...eveloped elements of a society but that doesnt imply that they operate independently a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, similarly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2321.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 451.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14634146341 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19204533891 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478935698448 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 753.3 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8918084706 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.05 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.55 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298260831897 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912185448232 0.0831039109588 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990570205403 0.0758088955206 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172789291082 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922695214572 0.0667264976115 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.