To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In deve

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To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

The statement interlinks the social investigations with the study of its major cities. The most important characteristic of a society include its political activities, economic structure, and popularization of technology. In my humble opinion, we should not arbitrary focus our attention only on these metropolitan areas because the economic, political, technology structure differ greatly among major cities and rural areas.

The political system of a society is often shaped by the economic and technology dynamics of local communities as well as nation as a whole. To testify that the politics is influenced by national institution such as the Constitution, it is sufficient to study how people in the major cities are involved in political activities. To understand the presidential election of the US, for example, one can followed the presidential candidate as they tour the major cities during their campaigns and investigate how the city residents make their decisions regarding the different candidates and how they think about the major issues covered in the debate among the candidates. Nevertheless, an important dimension of the the modern society is the diversity of political activities one can observe in the local communities. Voters in a small village in a Southern United States may think very differently about a particular issue compared to voters in New York. Therefore, to full understand the politic of the society, we have to study the rural area and small towns as well.

In addition to political system, economic development is another aspect one should not overlook in order to understand the society. Usually the major cities reflects the economic and social development at a faster pace, compared to rural areas or suburbs. To understand the economics of a society, one needs to study how the financial industries operate in such major cities. On the other hand, small villages and counties also play vital roles in the national economy with their contribution to difference economic sectors such as agriculture and tourism.

Finally, to understand a society, we need to look into how technologies are used among the people. To do that, we should not only to have investigation among major cities but also study the rural areas and small towns because the level of technology in the society indirectly represents the strength of education and the speed of economic development in that specific region.

Therefore, studying the major cities alone is not sufficient to fully understand the economy of the entire society.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2171.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 404.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37376237624 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00855212578 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482673267327 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 719.1 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3437724175 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.6875 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 5.21951772744 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144848717428 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631459292577 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558150621037 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982180468033 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324177560627 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 48.8420337079 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?


Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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