To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
By studying the major cities of a society, it is quite unwarranted to understand the most important characteristics of a society as it may vary from one to another. A society could be built for different reasons and generalizing the comprehensiveness of a society’s characteristics as its major cities are, would be dubious.
Firstly, a society could be consisted of a vast area with multiple provinces where there would be huge geographical distances between the major cities. it would be unreasonable to think that all the major cities would represent the same culture. For instance, indian society is consisted of a huge geographical area and there are huge differences in culture and tradition from the northern part to the southern part, eastern to the western part of the same society. Mumbai is one of the major cities which is well connected to the international world but there are provinces which never encountered any global trait. Kashmir people are way too different then the Bengolies of the west. studying the west bengal culture would not provide enough idea about the indian society as a whole as they have their own kind of culture, food habit and traditions.
Secondly, a society may not have natives as its major population and may have more immigrants which would have bigger impact in shaping the society’s characteristics. For example, cities of north America like Toronto of Canada or New York of US has a vast population of immigrants coming from different parts of the world for study or work or family purpose. studying one of these cities would have completely different idea than any of the north American society’s characteristics.
Finally, the major tourist spots of a society are mostly considered for their traditional or historical or aesthetic al reasons which have no connection with the societies important characteristics. Santorini of Greece is one of the most celebrated cities of the Europe which is known for its aesthetic and historical background. if an avid learner studies this city in order to know about european culture, he or she would be highly disappointed as modern european culture has advanced a lot than that historical culture.
In conclusion, a major city of any society may have some features of its characteristics if the city is selected after proper evaluation, yet it is very unlikely to expect any city to represent any particular society. The prompt is rational only at a limited level and cannot be generalized for any case.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2104.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 412.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1067961165 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06119830379 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473300970874 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7176666235 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.21951772744 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381229670879 0.243740707755 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136691434896 0.0831039109588 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124177477475 0.0758088955206 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254238626797 0.150359130593 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138774465765 0.0667264976115 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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