Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student s field of study Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim In developing and supporting your position be sure t

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Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

I agree with the statement that student need to take a variety of course, and step outside their comfort zone.Learning is a lifetime opportunity and students have to make best use of their learning.

First of all, every field in this field is dependent on every other field. There is no single field, which can work on its own.Since various disciplines were interrelated, the study of courses outside the students‘ own field may benefit study of their own major. For example,Accounting is a traditional major and it is also a traditional industry in Taiwan.People recorded every transaction in hand writing.Combine with information system, accounting system emerge.We can deal with a huge amount of data with just one click.A accounting student with information system knowledge will be more competitive in their job.

In addition,In today’s technologically advanced society it is impossible for those who focus their attention on the concerning fields to satisfy the needs for the future society.A variety of course can broaden our vision.Because of the revolution of science, we are closely connected with other all over the world.A broaden vision can help us to make a right decision.For instance, a marketing students may need to learn a basic concept of law.It will be very helpful when importing products.Importing shoes producing form China to Taiwan will be taxed 50% more than the regular price.If a student without the basic concept, he will probably make a wrong choice.

Lastly, society and industries need a multitalented person.For example, in a big accounting firm, the auditors will need to audit many different company in an extensive range of industries.A auditor have to know a fundamental banking when auditing a national bank.More over, a company do not stay in a single field, such as EVA airline in Taiwan.EVA airline is in an aviation industry while it operates a college school, lots of restaurant, and even security company.As a result, take a variety course may help cultivate yourself to be a multitalented person.

Some might argue that taking a variety courses outside the major field of study will distract the students from learning properly.I agree that it is possible that some students may distract form their own field and can not sharpen their skills.However, it helps students to learn to deal with multiple task.

To conclude, I would say that due to demand of multitalented person in industry, for better and broad future prospects of student and expansion of social circle. Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study. It will help in the development of society and country.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, lastly, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, of course, such as, as a result, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2266.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 434.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22119815668 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09205257781 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527649769585 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 709.2 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 23.0359550562 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 195.468155974 60.3974514979 324% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 226.6 118.986275619 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.4 23.4991977007 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 5.21951772744 259% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277558912414 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141869507746 0.0831039109588 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114135896534 0.0758088955206 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163567769235 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763888405201 0.0667264976115 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.9 14.1392134831 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 48.8420337079 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 12.1743820225 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 11.2143820225 171% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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