The statement asserts that every college student should be required to take a variety of courses outside his or her specific field of study while there have been various perspectives on this issue. Supporters may claim that interdisciplinary education would help students gain a comprehensive world view so that they can be truly enlightened and educated. On the other hand, however, to become an expert in any academic field, a student needs to pursue in that field attentively and diligently without too many distractions caused by irrelevant courses.
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not only aesthetic knowledge, cultural background and use of designing software are indispensable, but knowledge involving natural sciences are also necessary
Description: 'Not only...but also' is not used properly. can you re-write this sentence?
Sentence: For example, students majoring in Chinese literature can learn the method of logical writing from mathematic education and those majoring in natural sciences would benefit from social sciences that may inspire creativity or reveal some societal problems in demand of scientific research to solve.
Error: mathematic Suggestion: No alternate word
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'On the other hand' means 'However'. It doesn't mean 'On another hand'.
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Score: 4.5 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 589 350
No. of Characters: 3233 1500
No. of Different Words: 292 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.926 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.489 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.01 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 271 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 233 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 158 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 103 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.609 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.703 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.609 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.291 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.495 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.064 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5