The value of money should be instilled into youngsters since childhood because social success is defined by the amount of money one has.
We require money for everything. We need money for shelter, food, clothes and every essential commodity. I agree that it is important to instill value of money since childhood but I don't agree that social success is defined by the amount of money one has.
First of all, we should definitely instill importance of money into youngsters because money plays a crucial role in our life. Without money one can't buy food, shelter etc. If we instill the importance of money into the youngsters then it would help them to have a better and balanced life. For example, people like Dhirubhai Ambani knew the importance of money from his childhood which made him India's one of the richest person. Contrary to that, his son Anil Ambani went on to spend money extravagantly which made him bankrupt.
But at the same time money isn't everything and social success is not defined by the amount of money one has but it is defined by how much one contributes to his society. For example, Mahatma Gandhi also known as Father of the nation India belonged to a middle class family but due to his sacrifices and also due to his leadership India became independent for the British Rule. Mahatma Gandhi was a lawyer who pursued his law in foreign nation. If he would have decided to stay back in foreign and earn money by practicing law then his would have not been able to earn the social success he earned. Also Gautam Buddha, he was Prince of one the Indian dynasty. But, he saw the sorrows in the society which made him to leave everything behind and to become a monk. He was rich and had everything he wanted but he earned social success by preaching and spreading joy and good thoughts to the society.
Also, social success depends on one's achievement on the sector he or she is working. It depends on how much you are dedicated to the profession you are in. For example social success for a scientist is to win a Noble in the field of Science. Social success for a doctor is to perform the difficult surgeries. Social success for an engineer is to discover or develop something of the well being of the society.
Social success also depends on your behavior towards the people. A person who is rich but he doesn't behave properly with the people and his colleagues or his juniors then there is no use of such success. Patronizing people is not a good sign of behavior which shows ours attitude towards people and the society.
So at last I just want to conclude that anytime money is one of the most essential part of our life but it doesn't define our social success. Social success is defined by our behavior, our contribution of the society also by our achievements in the field we are working.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, then, well, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2215.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 482.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59543568465 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45088898227 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452282157676 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 705.6 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.44007722 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.28 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414506613527 0.243740707755 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118054682814 0.0831039109588 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12232787949 0.0758088955206 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212930287428 0.150359130593 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121234820394 0.0667264976115 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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