Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and Interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
As we in today’s world there are always 2 perspectives to look towards a certain topic or argument. Education is the most essential thing which one should posses in today’s world of competition. According to me the topic has 2 perspectives.
The first part of topic says that students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing field of study. But having interest in something and pursuing it a career are 2 different things because we don’t know what are talents and interest .For example one has interest in dancing but he or she wants to become a mechanical engineer so for that he or she should study the topic of engineering. Also we need to know that what are exactly the interests of the students and does this talent have a future in terms of career. For example if someone is talented in singing then he or she can pursue singing as career but if someone has interest in travelling then he or she can’t pursue it as a career. Also many times we see students have interest in a particular thing but they are not talented in that. For example someone has interest in singing but he is a mediocre in it so he will be not help in earning a livelihood.
But as I said each topic has 2 perspectives. So if someone is talented in a particular subject so then that student can pursue career in that particular field because in that he or she will give their hundred percent to achieve the highest position in that field .For example Sachin Tendulkar failed in 10th class but he is known as “god of cricket”. If his parents would have decided to ask him to study even though he failed or had asked to stop playing cricket he would have not become what he is today.
Atlast I just want to say that follow your interest or talent if you are good in that and are ready to contribute your 100 percent for that. And if you don’t want to pursue it as your career then study according to the availavbility of job is necessary.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...posses in today’s world of competition. According to me the topic has 2 perspectives. The fi...
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Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...own talents and interests when choosing field of study. But having interest in someth...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...don’t know what are talents and interest .For example one has interest in dancing ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...n’t know what are talents and interest .For example one has interest in dancing but...
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Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... should study the topic of engineering. Also we need to know that what are exactly t...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... he or she can’t pursue it as a career. Also many times we see students have interes...
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Line 5, column 263, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hieve the highest position in that field .For example Sachin Tendulkar failed in 1...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...eve the highest position in that field .For example Sachin Tendulkar failed in 10th...
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Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had decided'?
Suggestion: had decided
...own as “god of cricket”. If his parents would have decided to ask him to study even though he fail...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 360.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46388888889 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55400768341 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430555555556 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.0314673856 60.3974514979 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.785714286 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192739291451 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761708560973 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107117586375 0.0758088955206 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997279784299 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635696681256 0.0667264976115 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 48.8420337079 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.1639044944 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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