Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
The choice of one's college major might seem like a trivial task but it is anything other than that. It is common for students to pounder on this decision for weeks if not months. I am of the opinion that one must look inward while choosing a college major rather than seek validation outward for these two reasons.
The job market is ever so changing, what was in demand today may be archaic tomorrow. Thus taking a job solely on the bases of availability of jobs in the sort term could back fire in the long term .In the early 21th century the field for biomedical engineering was booming and rapidly growing. Subsequently, graduates of biomedical engineering were able to easily find high paying jobs immediately after graduating. However as further development in the field became stagnant due to complexities and also due to the prodigious cost of research in the field . Due to this the demand in the field came to an abrupt end. The students who had taken their majors in biomedical engineering due to the abundant availability of jobs by the 2010's found themselves facing a very different job market which needed IT professionals.The above example demonstrates how choosing a career solely on the bases of job availability can be a risky bet which can not work sometimes.
Further, even if we neglect the dynamic ever so changing job market, one should pursue their career in their interests rather than just follow the herd like a sheep. For example if some one is consummate in acting but due to the competitive market and saturation of actors decides to pursue their career in software engineering due to the abundance of high paying jobs it offers. Though initially one might be able to work but sooner our later they will find the job mundane and will come to their job only with the goal of finishing the work as soon as possible and go home this will result in haphazard work and ineffectiveness.While if they had chosen their career in acting maybe they would have earned less but they would have loved their work and in the who knows after a few years they could have a break through in their career in which they would earn way more than if they were yet doing the pedestrian IT job.
However some might argue that in this dynamic and competitive job market it is best that one selects a safe and secured field that guarantees them a job after their studies. But this doesn't mean one should not pursue their interests. If we do follow your interests we are likely to find the best job possible and likely to complete at the highest level possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2118.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 455.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65494505495 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61641464166 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487912087912 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.63453457 60.3974514979 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.2 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3333333333 23.4991977007 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239745753313 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820703693648 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401482176206 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138994236267 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318388997531 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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