People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Decision making mostly follows two train of thoughts one being based on emotions and the other based on logic. Trying to justify either with another will mostly lead to poor decisions. In my opinion I strongly agree to that making decisons based on emotions and then trying to justify those decisions using logic is always going to lead to making bad desicions for these two reasons.
The human mind cannot be predicted as it warries between one emotion today to another tommorow, in the heat to the moment one might think that the decision he/she has made sense but then futher pondering on it and thinking of the decision disinterstedly makes them regret it or makes them want to change it. For instance, just beacuse an employ had been working overtime and flattering the boss near appraisal peroid dosen't mean that the boss should give him the increment in his stipend overlooking the other diligent workers who have been performing all year around. If the boss choses the sycophant employee over the other diligent workers just based on emotions he is going to have a hard time convincing and retaining his dilligient workers as the logic he is going to provide to them will not reconcile with the decision made by him.
Making decision based on emotions and making them based on logic are two completely discreate thought processes. One might be frugal in most instances but then encountered by homeless man might feel empathy and donate to him. In the moment when the miser donates to the not so fortunate he is overcome by empathy an therefore doesn't think twice but then trying to reason the decision later with logic will only make him regret it as he only ended by losing money with nothing in return and for all we know the homeless man could also be an imposter finding an easy way to make a quick buck. The parsimonious man trying to justify his actions of donating is quite antithetical and it only gives light to the decision being a bad one.
Of course in some instances the decision made emotionally can also be logically sound. However this doesn't mean that for majority of the desicions made will be justifiable. In my opinion the desicion made by emotions and the desicions made by logic usually depend on the situtation and both of them should not be compared and intertwined and one should not regret or feel bad about the desicion made by either of the choices chosen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, for instance, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 420.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70476190476 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42593227282 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471428571429 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.2843489745 60.3974514979 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.0 118.986275619 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3076923077 23.4991977007 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240637545769 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106591291453 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071457613811 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165267628494 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757871501175 0.0667264976115 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 48.8420337079 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.