People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
As we see that a person’s behavior determines us about the society or surrounding in which he or she has grown as a child. And surrounding plays a vital role in the behavior of a person. At the same time a person’s behavior is also determined in by the way he or she tackles situation. Behavior plays a crucial role in everyone’s life. I totally agree statement. I will explain you with following reasons.
Firstly, as I stated in the first paragraph that a person’s behavior in his initial days when he is child is totally dependent on the surrounding in which is born and brought up. His behavior also reflects the behavior of his parents because he has grown up seeing them. For example, as we see Ratan Tata resembles J.R.D Tata in many aspects because he has grown up seeing him and he knows the style of work of J.R.D Tata. Similarly, friends also play a vital role in one’s behavior and thinking. For example, if we are in a friend circle of people who are calm in behavior and tackle every problem with ease then being in their surrounding we adopt their behavior and also I we are in a friend circle who are not ambitious then we to tend to live a non ambitious life.
Secondly, I also believe that in some cases person tends to learn from some incidents that take place in his life. He changes his behavior regarding something due the incident which changes his way of thinking. For example, suppose a person has arrogant behavior and due to which whenever his tries to make friends due to his arrogant behavior no one wants to be friend with him so he changes his behavior and becomes calm and composed. Due to this change in behavior people now have became friends with him. So as we see from this example that due to the surrounding people or we can say surrounding forces made him to change his behavior.
At last I will conclude by saying that surrounding has both good and bad effects on one’s behavior. It can make someone a better person or it can ruin someone’s life. So I would suggest that being in a good surrounding will make a better person in life.
Because surrounding forces play a vital role in one’s life.
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...ding will make a better person in life. Because surrounding forces play a vital role in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, for example, by the way, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 392.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51785714286 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56038968223 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.415816326531 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.0252238646 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.55 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145996255871 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545641289913 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329038999607 0.0758088955206 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843474219528 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393689065326 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.8420337079 141% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.1743820225 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.1639044944 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.38706741573 81% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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