Leaders created by the demands that are placed on them
The basic definition of the term leader is someone who leads from the front and takes care of his people or team in every situation agree with the topic but leaders so have certain quality and the guts and vision to be bring change in people Also becoming a leader is not a easy thing a lot of sacrifices are made by the prominent leaders for the society So leaders are created by the demands that people placed on them cant be the only criteria for the creation of leaders
As we many prominent leaders like Mahatma Gandhi Sar dar Vallabbhai Patel etc were born in a common family but if they would have decided to follow what others people do then it would have been difficult for india to get independence So there was a spark and a determination to bring some change in the society and inspire people for the movement of independence So as we see in this case people wanted independence so that was a demand which created the leaderslagree but these leaders had certain qualities due to which they were created and so people's demand can't be the only criteria for the creation of leaders
There are some cases in which the demand is not placed by the society but it was the group of people who wanted to bring the change in the society for betterment of people. For example in the tech industries many companies are trying for not carbon footprint upto 2030 and taking steps to reduce pollution. As we see here it was wholly decided by the leaders of that organisation to do so because it they even haven't tried to take steps to reduce pollution none would have asked them to do so.
Buteverycoin has 2 sides: Even in this case we have 2 sides. We have seen even in the past and also in the present world many leaders whom we really can't call leaders are created for their personal benefits. For example the Taliban gang Leaders who disturb the peace and harmony of the society and they have killed thousands of people in their bomb attacks and these people brain wash small innocent kids for personal benefits.So it was not the demands of the people which created such leaders it was Just done for their personal benefits.
I want to say atlast that every leader have some qualities which makes him differentfrom others and the demand createsa leader he or she should have those leadership qualities for fulfil the needs of the people and like I said in the last paragraph that some people become leader for their personal benefits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'had decided'?
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...ere born in a common family but if they would have decided to follow what others people do then it...
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...anisation to do so because it they even havent tried to take steps to reduce pollution...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2007.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 442.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5407239819 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35362959821 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432126696833 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 638.1 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 23.0359550562 273% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 386.283336848 60.3974514979 640% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 286.714285714 118.986275619 241% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.1428571429 23.4991977007 269% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290538782973 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119881531396 0.0831039109588 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973580599917 0.0758088955206 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192706877878 0.150359130593 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084525879218 0.0667264976115 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.5 14.1392134831 223% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 48.8420337079 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 12.1743820225 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.94 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 11.8971910112 445% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 11.2143820225 243% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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