Knowledge is of intangible nature which can neither be pirated nor be destroyed. It acquires bundle of information and skill that makes to understand about the surrounding. The only reason, people precede from jungle to advance life, is enlightenment of knowledge. More is the advancement in the world soaring, the complexity is even more increasing. For example: Technologically, most developed countries are striving to shift human life from earth to mars where life is very complex to survive. The author believe that more we acquire knowledge, things become more complex and mysterious rather than become more comprehensive; but I contradict the view of author. There are some examples explain that as we acquire more knowledge, the things become more comprehensive.
Firstly, after the child gets born, they grow up learning many things from their parents. Not only is the knowledge gained by learning but also by experience. Knowledge makes child conscious about what they do is right or wrong. Also can they be able to make their own decision. For example: children know the consequences very well while touching the fire, playing with sharp objects and animals etc. If the children lack knowledge then they become dependent on their parents and also grow clumsy. So, more the children gain the knowledge; more their life become comprehensive.
Secondly, during the ancient time, the disease malaria was most epidemic hazardous disease due to which millions of people died. About hundreds of year this disease was pervasive nevertheless the researcher breakout the medicine which cures the infected people, then only the disease get controlled over world. This impressive discovery by researcher make candidate to be awarded novel prize. This was not only possible if he won’t have gain profound knowledge even though the study is more complex.
Charles Babbage invented computer system which is cutting edge invention and the world depends on it, which is consider as the most vital part of life in this 21st century. This computer is very common among people but, going on painstaking, it is really profound mysterious subject. The hardware and software are the major ingredients to execute the system. This hardware consists of tremendous numbers of components which enormously complex to understand each and every parts. Similarly, software is also incredibly mysterious available these days is possible only after acquiring more knowledge.
I conclude that acquiring more knowledge is more comprehensive which make life to survive more easily in the world, but also the level of complexity aggrandize.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 454, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'mar'.
Suggestion: mar
...iving to shift human life from earth to mars where life is very complex to survive. ...
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Line 1, column 509, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
... is very complex to survive. The author believe that more we acquire knowledge, things ...
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Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...s about what they do is right or wrong. Also can they be able to make their own deci...
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Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s disease was pervasive nevertheless the researcher breakout the medicine which c...
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Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fected people, then only the disease get controlled over world. This impressive d...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...even though the study is more complex. Charles Babbage invented computer system...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
...n and the world depends on it, which is consider as the most vital part of life in this ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...so the level of complexity aggrandize.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2225.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 412.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40048543689 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7866561829 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538834951456 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.346474561 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.7083333333 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391673212922 0.243740707755 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11824690021 0.0831039109588 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180584774127 0.0758088955206 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236986427355 0.150359130593 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.17739842066 0.0667264976115 266% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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