What most human beings really want to attain is not knowledge, but certainty. Gaining real knowledge requires taking risks and keeping the mind open but most people prefer to be reassured rather than to learn the complex and often unsettling truth about anything.
It would not be right to say that all human beings do not want to gain knowledge but just certainty. Everyone wants certainty in life. If most human beings don't want to attain knowledge than there will be no new development and research. It it true that to learn something new requires one to take risk.
Historically, we have many examples where people have taken many risk to learn some new things or to show new principles. For example Gallelio first discovered that earth is round not flat which was against the traditional belief of people at that time. He took risk and published his theory.
Same can also be said for research of atomic energy. Although, there is risk of misuse of atomic energy by some rogue elements but benefits of this research outweigh risks.
If scientist wants to get new knowledge, findings it requires him/her to perform experiments which is like two-sided coin with success on one side and failure on other side. If scientist will stop performing experiments in fear of failure than how will he able to know new things? In business sometimes you have to make tough decisions in short you have to take risk to compete in market or to know trend in market. It is true that some systems are tough to understand but that is what it makes them special and attract many people.
We all know NASA, an american space agency takes risk of billions of dollars money and human lives to know new facts about our universe and its origin. It requires tons of money, human brain and courage to carry out each mission. If they will fear of accidents and loss of money or human lives than how we will be able to know about space? It takes immense efforts and significant risk to meet new result rather settling with same result is without any attempt is much easier.
Hence, to learn something new we have to get out of our comfort zone and should try whatever possible without caring too much about failures or risks involved. The positive attitude is necessary that we will never settle with this we want to learn more and for that we should not think much about small risks involved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
...certainty in life. If most human beings dont want to attain knowledge than there wil...
Line 1, column 239, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
...ill be no new development and research. It it true that to learn something new requir...
Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: IT_VBZ
Message: Did you mean 'trues'?
... no new development and research. It it true that to learn something new requires on...
Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: MANY_NN
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun risk seems to be countable; consider using: 'many risks'.
Suggestion: many risks
...e many examples where people have taken many risk to learn some new things or to show new...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, for example, in short, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 377.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62068965517 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30356959705 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53050397878 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7708812033 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6842105263 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8421052632 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47368421053 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251251786672 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797795587102 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763219695128 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130100243167 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116980181985 0.0667264976115 175% => OK
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.8420337079 141% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.1743820225 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.