When old buildings stand on ground that modern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of old historic buildings | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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When old buildings stand on ground that modern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes, modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of old historic buildings.

Modern planner's are no doubt are smartest and efficient of all times in past several centuries, they tend to solve problem with some reasoning and are capable of building any building with multiple stories in harsh and rash condition. While some old building's are associated with some historical event's of cherish or shame, which must be known to upcoming generations in order to keep heritage surviving for long time in future. It is not necessary that old building's are of no use today, there are some building's present till date which are used for some task's like office or centre or any other thing.
First Is the example of White House, the office and living house of one of the most important President in World. It has been in same location for more than 200 year's, every time new any problem this old building raises it has to be solved on urgent basis as it is been accommodated by President and the country will no tolerate vulnerable security of President. As it has been witness of some historical event's like signing of act that abolishes slavery, racism and many more act's.
Second is the example of Shaniwar Wada, the historical palace which was accommodated by the Peshwa's, who ruled across several parts of sub-continent part of Asia. Well it is not in best condition due to environmental problem's, people's day to day use and spoiling building by drawing graffiti on wall's. The building has been witness of the many historical incident's some of them were good while some were extremely bad but there is need to some how preserve the building to keep historical heritage preserved at any expense.
Third is the example of Old Parliament Of India, it was the first important building where constitution of India was enacted on citizen's of India after Independence. The Building is was used till date by the Member's of Parliament to form some important law's. The problem with this building is that it is impossible to accommodate the future count of member's. And no law or resolution can be passed or rescind without the taking every member's view. So there was need to build new building but that doesn't mean that the government is free to demolish the building for some modern structure's.
I do not agree with the statement of abolishing the old building to build modern architecture rather than preserving it. If the building carries importance in past time and even today then it is better to preserve the building rather than demolishing it. Because historical importance is way more important than the lumpsum amount it will cost in preserving.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...were extremely bad but there is need to some how preserve the building to keep historica...
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... India after Independence. The Building is was used till date by the Members of Pa...
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...was need to build new building but that doesnt mean that the government is free to dem...
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...he building rather than demolishing it. Because historical importance is way more impor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, third, well, while, as to, no doubt

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 19.5258426966 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2128.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 440.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83636363636 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65066653087 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481818181818 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6609625198 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.176470588 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8823529412 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292932318164 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990892238415 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716853621807 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171537658302 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561913602217 0.0667264976115 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, third, well, while, as to, no doubt

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments