While some leaders in government, sports, industry, and other areas attribute their success to a well-developed sense of competition, a society can better prepare its young people for leadership by instilling in them a sense of cooperation."
Is the best way to prepare young leaders in any field is to bring cooperation between them and ignoring competition? The author gives the priority to cooperation than competition. In any field to come up with the best we need some comparity between
the candidates.
For finding good leader we must see on certain parameters in which parameter he/she is weak or strong. If we have competitors we can come up with the best out of us and prove our leadership qualities. For example, when any bill passes in a parliament there are oppositions who oppose the bill and figure out it faults so if we don's have competitions then how can we find out our faults in the work.
Not only in parliament but in any organization there were lots of competition for getting contracts for their company, employees compete with each other for completing their targets. Companies organize several competitions among their employees to get the best of their employees.Further, in presidential elections there are candidates of different parties who come up with their different agendas for the progress of the country, if no competition were there then how can people of the country decides who is the best suited candidate for the country.
In the sports also competition plays an important role in deciding the proper candidate for the role. For example, for qualification for the olympic games several candidates of same country fight for the place in qualification by competiting the best get selected.
In some cases cooperation also plays vital role in leadership. It is the duty of the leader to lead their team in right direction for this their should be some cooperations among the members.
In final analysis, by imposing the competition between the candidates we are able to decide which is better for the leadership in the society.Competition also gives the analysis of the weak points of the leader.So, not only cooperation is necessary but competition also plays vital role in making the leaders of the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... bill and figure out it faults so if we dons have competitions then how can we find ...
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Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
... have competitions then how can we find out our faults in the work. Not only i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an we find out our faults in the work. Not only in parliament but in any organ...
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Suggestion: Further
...yees to get the best of their employees.Further, in presidential elections there are ca...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cases'' or 'case's'?
Suggestion: cases'; case's
...ting the best get selected. In some cases cooperation also plays vital role in le...
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Suggestion:
...ole in leadership. It is the duty of the leader to lead their team in right direc...
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Suggestion: Competition
...etter for the leadership in the society.Competition also gives the analysis of the weak poi...
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Suggestion: So
...alysis of the weak points of the leader.So, not only cooperation is necessary but ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'as for', 'for example', 'in some cases']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.259154929577 0.240241500013 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.129577464789 0.157235817809 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0788732394366 0.0880659088768 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0366197183099 0.0497285424764 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.056338028169 0.0444667217837 127% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.166197183099 0.12292977631 135% => OK
Participles: 0.0253521126761 0.0406280797675 62% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.02656832712 2.79330140395 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0197183098592 0.030933414821 64% => OK
Particles: 0.0112676056338 0.0016655270985 677% => OK
Determiners: 0.123943661972 0.0997080785238 124% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0140845070423 0.0249443105267 56% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0225352112676 0.0148568991511 152% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2021.0 2732.02544248 74% => OK
No of words: 335.0 452.878318584 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0328358209 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.310447761194 0.366273622748 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25671641791 0.280924506359 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2 0.200843997647 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.155223880597 0.132149295362 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02656832712 2.79330140395 108% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 219.290929204 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477611940299 0.48968727796 98% => OK
Word variations: 48.5948389685 55.4138127331 88% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6194690265 63% => OK
Sentence length: 25.7692307692 23.380412469 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.4100073989 59.4972553346 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.461538462 141.124799967 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7692307692 23.380412469 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.615384615385 0.674092028746 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.21349557522 153% => OK
Readability: 51.4408725603 51.4728631049 100% => OK
Elegance: 2.0253164557 1.64882698954 123% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257511874826 0.391690518653 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.161851706386 0.123202303941 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0944690351327 0.077325440228 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.702280051677 0.547984918172 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.16424428306 0.149214159877 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133580848404 0.161403998019 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521948782092 0.0892212321368 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.344267718092 0.385218514788 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0946645134007 0.0692045440612 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177393202029 0.275328986314 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356885750212 0.0653680567796 55% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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