Law should not be rigid or fixed. Instead, they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Laws are the basic principles of our day to day life; hence, behavoir of the people should not go beyond the lines confined by laws. Laws are strong weapons to maintain peace and harmony in a society. However, everyday and every situation can be different. You cannot apply the same law in each situation. It has to be flexible.
In general, there are many laws. Violation of laws can have different forms. There are different laws for different situations. Hence while taking a decision, one has to take decisions keepng in mind circumstances of a particular case. For example, it has to be considered whether a person has made an offence deliberately, unintentionally or for money.For example, Law of one child in China. According to this law in China, each couple can have only one child. Now after the earthquake, the Chinese government is thinking about revising the law. Law have to keep pace with the changing times.
Another example of a law changing with time is the law related to the legal heir. In ancient times, only the sons of the family had right to the family property. As the time has progressed and woman have started asking for their rights, law has changed and now all offspring have equal right to the family wealth. Now a days, another aspect in this context also plays a role. That is the will of he dying person.
Similarly, you cannot give the same punishment to two persons who have killed some other persons for different reasons. While one person might have killed for personal gain and the other have killed for saving his life. So here the law should have to be flexible.
Finally, it can be said that there should be fixed law for every crime to guide the judges and the government to install rules and regulations.However at the same time , there should be flexibility when it comes to applying laws inn different circumstances. It should be in a way that is beneficial for the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'similarly', 'so', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'in general']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.232804232804 0.240241500013 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.174603174603 0.157235817809 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0714285714286 0.0880659088768 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0449735449735 0.0497285424764 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0291005291005 0.0444667217837 65% => OK
Prepositions: 0.100529100529 0.12292977631 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0582010582011 0.0406280797675 143% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66074219634 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0396825396825 0.030933414821 128% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.113756613757 0.0997080785238 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0343915343915 0.0249443105267 138% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.010582010582 0.0148568991511 71% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1930.0 2732.02544248 71% => OK
No of words: 338.0 452.878318584 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7100591716 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.304733727811 0.366273622748 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.210059171598 0.280924506359 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.153846153846 0.200843997647 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.100591715976 0.132149295362 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66074219634 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 219.290929204 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51775147929 0.48968727796 106% => OK
Word variations: 54.3709224647 55.4138127331 98% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6194690265 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.6956521739 23.380412469 63% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.218386842 59.4972553346 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9130434783 141.124799967 59% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6956521739 23.380412469 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.478260869565 0.674092028746 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.21349557522 288% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 35.7015693337 51.4728631049 69% => OK
Elegance: 1.57446808511 1.64882698954 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239192051862 0.391690518653 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.138474677857 0.123202303941 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.112980401517 0.077325440228 146% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.469231362668 0.547984918172 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.176818175431 0.149214159877 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889006602299 0.161403998019 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816694286292 0.0892212321368 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.320090230403 0.385218514788 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0599150447736 0.0692045440612 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166398092278 0.275328986314 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639542354468 0.0653680567796 98% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88274336283 225% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.70907079646 258% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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