Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
The Law primarily a responsibility of the government, to decrease a crime in the country. The law help judiciary to protect an innocence and send a criminal to the jail. But there are many cases, where existing laws is not so perfect, in-terms of an exceptions. It happen many times that, due to a lack of an exception,the judiciary system declare a criminal to an innocent. To solve this problem, we should make the law flexible, such we that we could allow exceptions like time, places and circumstance.
The law Should be structured in such a way that we can take an account of various circumstances, time and places. By tacking an account of circumstances we can save innocent to be declare as criminal via judiciary system. Let me give example of one of situation, where one innocent murder one person for a reason of safety. The a reason of safety is a circumstance where somebody came toward you, and threat you. At that time what you can do to save your life?, you think to oppose the person, but if he kills you than what you do? Nothing!. That’s why the law should be flexible for this kind of situation, where you have to kill someone to save your life from his/her attack.
The Judiciary system should also give flexibility to take account of time and places, By tacking account of the time and places, we can conquer situation like wrong time given by the innocent. Sometimes innocent not able to provide exact time of crime, to solve this issue we should make law flexible. Where we consider a proof for judiciary action not time. This may help a citizen of the country to prove their innocence.
The judiciary system is to protect citizen of the country from different threat, by giving them flexibility around time, place and time might increase in fake cases but main motto behind solved in large percentage. It’s not possible to stop crime by 100%, but we can improve experience of taking justice until some one call to be criminal.
In conclusion: Though it’s not easy to make flexible law around some an exceptions like any circumstance but it’s not ethically correct to punish an innocent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'helps'.
Suggestion: helps
...ecrease a crime in the country. The law help judiciary to protect an innocence and s...
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Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an exception' or simply 'exceptions'?
Suggestion: an exception; exceptions
...ing laws is not so perfect, in-terms of an exceptions. It happen many times that, due to a la...
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Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'happens'?
Suggestion: happens
... perfect, in-terms of an exceptions. It happen many times that, due to a lack of an ex...
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Line 1, column 319, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...imes that, due to a lack of an exception,the judiciary system declare a criminal to ...
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Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'The' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: The; A
...rder one person for a reason of safety. The a reason of safety is a circumstance wher...
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Line 7, column 316, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...rove experience of taking justice until some one call to be criminal. In conclusion: T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75806451613 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70571026154 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491935483871 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2963175722 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225860249083 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791044196067 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109180594315 0.0758088955206 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120947100737 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561962719462 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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