Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
In all actuality, I think it is more probable that our bodies will surely deteriorate long
before our minds do in any significant amount. Who can’t say that technology has
made us lazier, but that’s the key word, lazy, not stupid. The ever increasing amount of
technology that we incorporate into our daily lives makes people think and learn every
day, possibly more than ever before. our abilities to think, learn, philosophize, etc. may
even reach limits never dreamed of before by average people. using technology to
solve problems will continue to help us realize our potential as a human race.
If you think about it, using technology to solve more complicating problems gives
humans a chance to expand their thinking and learning, opening up whole new worlds
for many people. many of these people are glad for the chance to expand their
horizons by learning more, going to new places, and trying new things. If it wasn’t for
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...r bodies will surely deteriorate long before our minds do in any significant amount....
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...r bodies will surely deteriorate long before our minds do in any significant amount....
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...ho can't say that technology has made us lazier, but that's the key word...
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...es makes people think and learn every day, possibly more than ever before. our ab...
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... day, possibly more than ever before. our abilities to think, learn, philosophize...
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... think, learn, philosophize, etc. may even reach limits never dreamed of before by...
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...er dreamed of before by average people. using technology to solve problems will con...
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...y average people. using technology to solve problems will continue to help us reali...
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...learning, opening up whole new worlds for many people. many of these people are g...
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... up whole new worlds for many people. many of these people are glad for the chance...
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Suggestion: Horizons
...e glad for the chance to expand their horizons by learning more, going to new places, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 19.5258426966 10% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 58.6224719101 34% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 12.9106741573 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 2235.4752809 37% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 159.0 442.535393258 36% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1320754717 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 4.55969084622 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58502042623 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 215.323595506 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.704402515723 0.4932671777 143% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 704.065955056 36% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.3035231812 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.97078651685 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0524882939842 0.243740707755 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0233815287998 0.0831039109588 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0257587802852 0.0758088955206 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0208257523047 0.150359130593 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215037469938 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 100.480337079 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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