It is possible to pass laws that control or place limits on people's behavior, but legislation cannot reform human nature. Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts and minds.
Law means a body of rules and regulations in the form of judicial opinions, or in the form of constitutions etc. Law is used by the governing bodies to control the behavior of a society. The functions of law vary for different societies or countries. However, legal laws are different from the moral behavior or the traditions of societies. The laws are formed by some authorized body like court while customs and traditions are made by the members of society. It is very important to understand here that both the things are made to run the society smoothly.
However, I agree with the statement that although laws can place limits on people's behavior but they cannot alter or convert people's heart. There is no second thought that very strict laws can sometimes have negative effects on the society. Usually laws help to give a peaceful life to people. It plays an essential role in maintaining stableness and development of society. It infuses a fear in the public that if they do some illegal activity, they will be punished. If this fear will not be there, then the instances of terrorism and crimes will increase that will make the life of the members of society unstable and disturbed. Laws make our lives comfortable. Hence, it is required to have laws that have positive impact on people's behavior.
However, in history, we have many examples where laws had negative influence on the society. The laws made by some of the kings were so cruel and inhuman that they had bad effect on the human nature. However, it is also true that although laws are used to make people's lives easy and secure, laws cannot change what is in people's heart. Despite many strict and cruel laws, feelings of hate and disobedience keep growing in the hearts of public, if the laws are not changed according to time. Many revolutions in the history of humankind are the evidence of this statement. Russian revolution and the freedom fight of India are the best examples of the outcry of public against the laws and legislations of the government.
Laws should be changed according to the human nature. Hence, it is true that laws and rules reflect the human nature but these cannot change the way people think. Although laws should not be altered at every outcry, they should be modified according to human nature that reflects people's minds and hearts. It is essential to make people respect laws. Otherwise, there will be more and more instances of people not following laws. You cannot ignore the fact that some degree of freedom is required for a balanced society. Without people obeying any law, it will be like an empty law. Hence, the social attitude towards laws should be considered while making a formal law. If the authorities want to use the laws to control or alter human nature, then they have to make the laws more flexible.
Hence, it can be concluded that the laws that control or place limits on people's behavior cannot reform human nature.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244247787611 0.240241500013 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.164601769912 0.157235817809 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0849557522124 0.0880659088768 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0513274336283 0.0497285424764 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0336283185841 0.0444667217837 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118584070796 0.12292977631 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0424778761062 0.0406280797675 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.46122032291 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0247787610619 0.030933414821 80% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.102654867257 0.0997080785238 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0318584070796 0.0249443105267 128% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0106194690265 0.0148568991511 71% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2953.0 2732.02544248 108% => OK
No of words: 511.0 452.878318584 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77886497065 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.58838876751 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.342465753425 0.366273622748 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252446183953 0.280924506359 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.162426614481 0.200843997647 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0939334637965 0.132149295362 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46122032291 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 219.290929204 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.428571428571 0.48968727796 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.9535708544 55.4138127331 88% => OK
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6194690265 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0333333333 23.380412469 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0610378274 59.4972553346 56% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4333333333 141.124799967 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0333333333 23.380412469 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.674092028746 49% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 42.2779517286 51.4728631049 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.62411347518 1.64882698954 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315070529636 0.391690518653 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.126736868039 0.123202303941 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0880223712445 0.077325440228 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.493842813207 0.547984918172 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.168682957036 0.149214159877 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131858669108 0.161403998019 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935350742618 0.0892212321368 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.426159875195 0.385218514788 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.064682528373 0.0692045440612 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257448639147 0.275328986314 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958869749049 0.0653680567796 147% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.4325221239 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88274336283 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 7.22455752212 194% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 26.0 13.5995575221 191% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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