"It is possible to pass laws that control or place limits on people's behavior, but legislation cannot reform human nature. Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts and minds."
Discipline is the ability to control your behaviour or the way you live and work. It is essentially inner or personal discipline, which is a method of training and conditioning your mind, heart and body for controlling your behaviour. One has to be disciplined not only in personal matters but also in a society. Man is a social animal and that is why he has to obey the rules and orders of a society. Thus, laws are very essential to control people's behaviour and put limits on them so that everyone can live together in harmony. Anyone disobeying these rules is liable for punishment so that the perverse act is not repeated. However, if the punishment is enough for the offender to make him obey the laws or not cannot be said for sure.
Laws can restrict human behaviour. Laws are meant to control and train. The purpose of laws is to maintain general peace. Thus, laws are formulated keeping in mind the best interests of the society. This puts a lot of responsibility on the individual to obey these laws. Whether laws are followed or not is a very personal choice. Although the procedure of punishing the offenders is made in order to correct them and stop them from committing the offence again, it is not a guarantee that this system would correct the offender forever. Once the punishment is over, the offender will again commit the offence. The question here is about responsibility. Only a person who understands his responsibility would refrain from committing crimes. On the other hand, someone who is not responsible and does not have the morals and principles that make him a social person would commit the crime repeatedly. This will happen unless the nature of the offender changes.
It would be incorrect on the part of the authorities to think that laws are enough to bring in peace. Laws are only a demarcation of a person's behaviour. Nevertheless, there is no way to demark a person's mind. Before the crime is actually committed, it is already committed in the mind of the offender. Thinking of doing an unlawful thing is as good as doing it. We can stop the actions once or twice. It is possible that the offender is punished by law sometimes. However, this does not eradicate crime form the society. This is because it exists in the minds of the offenders. Thus, to bring an end crime and offence, the mind has to be reformed and conditioned.
Punishment cannot bring reform, neither can laws of the society. For the society to be free of crime, the criminals need to be given moral training rather than physical punishment. With moral training, the person is taught to lead a clean and healthy moral life. He would realize the importance of principles and how to lead his life according to these principles. Not only does this bring back order into his life, but he would also understand how one must live with others in a society. Thus, the person would start respecting social rules and regulations which would make him a responsible citizen.
Thus, it is clear that laws are only good enough to put a limit or restriction. However, this does not check the offence from being committed because the mind and heart of a person cannot be bound by laws and regulations. For a society free of crime, we must have a society of people with good morals, minds and hearts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 539, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'Anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'disobeys'.
Suggestion: disobeys
...ne can live together in harmony. Anyone disobeying these rules is liable for punishment so...
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Line 9, column 136, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...peace. Laws are only a demarcation of a persons behaviour. Nevertheless, there is no wa...
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Line 9, column 505, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[4]
Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
... However, this does not eradicate crime form the society. This is because it exists ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, as to, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 39.0 19.5258426966 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2737.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 580.0 442.535393258 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71896551724 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90746259869 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66289238203 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.415517241379 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 856.8 704.065955056 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 38.0 20.2370786517 188% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8815672118 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0263157895 118.986275619 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2631578947 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.47368421053 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.13820224719 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139242590922 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415428068499 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537988831749 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911932862207 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331779231269 0.0667264976115 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 14.1392134831 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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