In a world filled with significant challenges, owning pets, and especially owning costly, resource-consuming dogs, is an irresponsible use of time and money.
Write a response in which you discuss how much you agree or disagree with the claim and include the most compelling reasons and/or examples that someone could use to dispute your point of view.
As technology develops and the life condition of human-beings ameliorates, more and more animals, especially those dogs that are surrounded by city life are getting endangered. Some people, zoologists, and other experts have suggested that owing pets, especially dogs squander the time and money of the owners. They also might express that this is an illegal action. But while the impulse behind this idea is understandable and admirable, in the end it is not an irresponsible concept.
From the point of view of a scholar, the reason for not keeping animals might be that they carry diseases which can be catch by human and are known as human-animal diseases. According to the center for diseases control and protection, animals like wild reptiles can carry dangerous diseases without showing any symptoms. Therefore, ten thousands of people can get infections each year from wild animals. Besides, a wide range of people believe that when animals are kept in private homes, far from their natural habitants, they lose their natural abilities such as hunting or breeding. Furthermore, many argue that instead of taking care of animals and lavishing our precious time and money on them, pet owners must spend their properties on families and people who need care. Nevertheless, do these arguments show that we should not keep animals because they waste our time and money? I want to present some strong reasons to conclude that the answer is no.
First of all, dog-owning can be a positive and life changing event. Considered as human’s best friends since always, dogs are the most loyal friends and their love to their owners knows no limit and bounds. They company with humans and help unconditionally to their owners and families.
Second reason might be that owning a pet requires a great deal of responsibility and needs proper care and attention too. There are different studies that show how owning a dog can boost responsibility and compassion. Having said that, from grooming to their diet, the owner must take care of everything and must treat them as a member of the family.
Lastly, some scientists believe that owning a pet improves mental health. A recent study found that even the simple act of watching your dog sleeping or playing in your garden can lower the blood pressure and heart rate. In this way, stress disappears and humans feel more relaxed and blessed. Moreover, gazing into a dog’s eyes, releases oxygen in both humans and dogs which is the feel-good hormone responsible for euphoria.
In general, of course there are some vital activities such as feeding hungers and spending money on taking care of elderly people or orphans. But reviewing the positive reasons that are listed above, convinces us to own a dog and experience the love and other fascinating moments with them which leads to our mental and physical health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 332, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: 'ten thousand'.
Suggestion: ten thousand
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, while, in general, of course, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 14.8657303371 222% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2395.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 474.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05274261603 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63882224237 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565400843882 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 735.3 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9512724808 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.130434783 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6086956522 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52173913043 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110942432554 0.243740707755 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347639322343 0.0831039109588 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034614435145 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645877717693 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253320589274 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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