The chart below shows the sleep patterns of people in five different occupations according to Canadian study. Give possible reason for the difference.

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The chart below shows the sleep patterns of people in five different occupations according to Canadian study. Give possible reason for the difference.

Canadian research found the different occupations of human that reflects their sleep patterns.

The study reveals five diverse categories. First of all, the students typically have a normal sleep pattern at eight hours at night without interruption, 11 p.m-to-7 a.m. It dues that they spend their time only in the school and usual activity. Their sleeping times are steadily different with the business executives which are lacking by 2 hours, but perhaps because their job takes a busy and stressful time.

By contrast, the mother has less normal sleeping time. Especially, when having young children, she certainly is occupied to care child. At the midnight, 1-3 a.m., the baby usually cries a lot. Of course, baby wakes her mother up. However, mother also has eight hours pattern sleep, although hers is not normal as the student. Another occupation related to a breach time is a doctor. Doctor only sleeps for five hours in the night which is started 1 a.m. to 7 p.m., because he has to control the patients, even less at 3-4 a.m., the emergency situation occasionally needs a doctor.

Finally, truck driver occupation has a unique sleep pattern. When other occupations sleep at night, truck drivers conversely sleep in the morning, noon, and evening. They usually sleep in the disorganized time, 6 p.m., 7-10 a.m., and 4-6 p.m. It is probably because they need to keep driving on the road.

To sum up, if someone needs or loves their occupation, she/he should accept whatever of the consequences, especially in sleep pattern.

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