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The chart below shows the sleep patterns of people in five different occupations according to a Canadian study.
Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information below.
Give possible reasons for the differences.
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Sentence: Comparable with mother has same long time is 8 hours, but distinct of time, habitually mother must wake in early morning in 1-3 a.m. because baby was crying this time.
Description: The fragment Comparable with is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace Comparable with adverb
Description: The fragment , habitually mother is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace habitually with adjective
Sentence: In conclusion, the effect time for sleep depend on occupations each other.
Description: The fragment sleep depend on is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace depend with verb, past participle
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No. of Words: 265 200
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Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 10
No. of Words: 265 200
No. of Characters: 1256 1000
No. of Different Words: 157 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.035 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.74 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.467 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 74 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 58 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.722 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.837 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.301 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.524 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.088 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4