Problem Education at Indonesia
Problem Education at Indonesia
Nowadays, hot topic this year is problem education at Indonesia. During 2013, the scale of education is very lack. Basically, all of the people not continue study because they are not interest of education. I think that problem happen because nothing educated for important education. So, many people in Indonesia not good enough for skills, attitude and academic backgrounds.
From publication media mass, given information amount graduated every year. Sample 8 of 10 students not pass for senior high schools at Indonesia.
Firstly, factor caused by lack economy in urban area, financial make a reason for people not interest continue studying. Furthermore, cost of begin to study at senior high schools private at Jakarta. Start from 10.000.000,- IDR / 3 years to 300.000,- IDR / month. That is big problem for poor people. As well as, for senior high school public in Jakarta do not pay for beginning study but every month, must pay less than 200.000 IDR / month for another activities at school.
Secondly, another reason are decrease facilities for school. Many building are broken in Jakarta. Besides, teacher try request of money for government but still not yet provided fund for repairing building schools at Indonesia. Moreover, budget education from DEPDIKNAS Department of Nationality Education are 400.000,- IDR / students at schools. I do not know what to make a big budget it.
Thirdly, the reason why problem it. Nothing motivate educate for studied. Many people not understand about important education for life.
Finally, I believe if we repair it together so problem education can clear.
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I think that problem happen because nothing educated for important education
I think that problem happens because nothing is educated for important education
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