Giving gifts and receiving gifts is the best way to improve social relations among people. Do you agree or disagree?
Man being social by nature, life offers ways and means to evolve relations in them.However relations go through so many ups and downs in life. Nevertheless a pleasant way to lead life lends opportunities and endless efforts to make the world a sweet and pleasant place with amicable relations.
Gifts carry feelings and emotions. They are not merely lifeless objects. Now even pets are given as gifts. People improve relations in family, with relatives and colleagues. It brings cheers and smiles on sad faces. Besides, gifts presented can change the life of people. A book gifted to someone dese...
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.044 0.07
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.223 4.7
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