The number of overweight children in developed countries is increasing. Some people think this due to problems such as the growing number of fast food outlets. other believe that parents are to blame for not looking after their children’s health. To what extent do you agree with these view?
The question about overweight children that are resulted from fast food outlets or parents’ low attention would be discussed in this essay.
In some developed countries, the growing number of overweight children could not be handled. This situation occurs because there are many fast food outlets which intrigue children to have the food. According to CNN.com, fast food contains too many calories, salt and artery-clogging cholesterol. If the children consumed the food, they might not have time to avoid from overweight.
A further point is that parents as staff members are busy ...
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