Some people believe that unemployed people should be made to work for their welfare/benefit payments. Others, however, see this as cheap labour.
Discuss the possible advantages and disadvantages of making unemployed people take any job.
Do you believe that making unemployed people work is a good idea?
Having no jobs known as idleness is a classic problem faced by Indonesia. Particularly in Jakarta, many people that at first time came to Jakarta hoped that they could easily get a job. However, most of them end up as unemployed people. For solving this reason, some people argue that these people must be offered a job so they can get good payments while the others think that idleness people can be used as inexpensive labour. In this essay, I would examine benefits and drawbacks of making job for jobless people and give my opinion.
By giving a chance for the idleness to work in workplaces, b...
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Sentence: However, employing the people without succifient ability would cost the companies more expansive for training.
Error: succifient Suggestion: sufficient
Sentence: Not suprisingly, they do not have any speciality in skill, so for preparing them before starting work, they must get intensive vocational training.
Error: speciality Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: suprisingly Suggestion: surprisingly
Sentence: On the other hand, if companies just believe them without adequated training, they would probably make many mistakes that make companies loss.
Error: adequated Suggestion: No alternate word
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'On the other hand' means However. It doesn't mean 'On another hand'.
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