The table and bar chart show how journey times in a city centre changed after improvements were made to the transport network, and the costs of using different forms of transport in the city.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table and bar chart show how travel times in a metropolis centre changed after improvements were made to the transport channel, and the trade of using contrasting forms of transport in the conurbation.
According to the table, there are different trends for average journey time before improvement and average journey time after improvement by form of transport such as tram, bus, taxi and car.
Trip times which had the greatest times of their journey before improvements with form of transport by tram and bus, on average 22 and 28 minutes, while taxi and car have the fastest way, just 9 and 10 minutes.
By comparisons, average journey after improvements, form of transport by bus is the biggest minutes, they take 23 minutes. After that, form of transport by tram, car and taxi has average journey time, 16, 15 and 12 minutes.
That is mean, taxi journey take less time than bus journey in journey time after improvements.
Secondly, the bar chart shows how much it cost to use different forms of transport in the city. It shows that taxi have the greatest cost around 1.80 poundsterling with average cost per kilometre. It is not cheaper than travel by bus or by tram which around 0.20 until 0.40 poundsterling.
Overall, there are transports like taxi journey which take less time after improvenets and bus with about 0.20 poundsterling which has the lowest price for traveler.
Sentence: That is mean, taxi journey take less time than bus journey in journey time after improvements.
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Sentence: Secondly, the bar chart shows how much it cost to use different forms of transport in the city.
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Sentence: Overall, there are transports like taxi journey which take less time after improvenets and bus with about 0.20 poundsterling which has the lowest price for traveler.
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