The table and the chart below give information about traveling to work in Houston, Texas.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comarisons where relevant
The table and diagram explain commuters’ percentages in using transportation modes by consider age and carbon dioxide emission from each transportation modes.
Most of people choose to travel alone by car, at 48%. The least alternatives that chosen by commuters are cycle/walk at 4%. The other modes are train/bus and car, that chosen by workers at 37% and 11% each.
Mostly, commuters who use public transportation are at average 47 years old, the youngest average–at 39, prefer to use cycle/walk. The others are car with alone and more than one person at 43 and 44 respectively.
The biggest CO2 is produced by people who drive car by himself, at under 0,35 kilos then, followed by car for many people at approximately 0,1 kilos. Bus/train cause the least CO2 emission at slightly more than 0,05 kilos.
In all, car with one person only is not only the most famous but also the most polluted vehicle. Cycle or walk are the most unpopular and unpolluted transportation mode for everybody who travels regularly between work and home.
Sentence: The table and diagram explain commuters' percentages in using transportation modes by consider age and carbon dioxide emission from each transportation modes.
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Sentence: Bus/train cause the least CO2 emission at slightly more than 0,05 kilos.
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The least alternatives that chosen by commuters are cycle/walk
The least alternatives that are chosen by commuters are cycle/walk
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