Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effect on children. Do you agree or disagree.
Today is an age of technology. Over the years, huge advancement in technology has given us many gadgets. Computer is one of the greatest gifts of technology that the modern world has received. Computers are used in almost every field of life e.g. research, hospitals, offices, schools etc.
Computers have lots of advantages. Using computers the manual work can be greatly reduced e.g. some difficult calculations which may take days to do manually can be done in a matter of minutes. Computers are also used to maintain records as they can store large amounts of data.
Computers have reached h...
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