Write a letter to your friend and ask to take care of your children while you are away on a business trip overseas. In your letter include
- What their likes and dislikes in food are.
- What activities they like the most.
- Suggest an arrangement for you to pick them up after the trip.
Dear Anne,
Thank you in advance for looking after my children when I'm on my business trip. You know how much this trip means to me. It's indeed a dream coming true now.
I just want to let you know that Sufi and Sara have some special food habits. They are both allergic to banana and coconut so please refuse using these ingredients in their food. Sara doesn't like fish at all but they both love chicken, pizza and soup. It's good to mention that strawberry ice cream is their favorite.
I need to mention a couple of things about the activities that they like the most. One of the hobbies ...
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