Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, you have a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it. You need to explain:-when are where you hired it-describe how the accident happened-what kind o

Essay topics: Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, you have a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it. You need to explain:
- when are where you hired it
- describe how the accident happened
- what kind of action did you take after the accident

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing in regards to the car which I hired on the 24th of October 2012 at around noon at Melbourne Tullamarine Airport. My registration number is AM 24000689.

Unfortunately, the car was damaged in a minor accident involving another vehicle while I was driving in the central business district on the same day. The other drive failed to stop at a red light and almost collided into the right door of my car at an intersection. Though he managed to brake beforehand, he was unable to avoid the side mirror which was completely ruined from his carelessness.

As a result, I filled in the necessary reports and insurance forms. On a positive note, the other party’s insura ...

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