"Although abuse of the system are inevitable, social welfare payments are essential to protect the rights citizens have to a guaranteed minimum income in a democratic society"
Discuss.
In a bid to boost the well-being of the population, governments worldwide have implemented their own social welfare system. However, over the years, these systems have displayed a series of flaws and frauds which remain omnipresent despite attempts at rectifying them. Nevertheless, scraping social benefits will most likely entail disastrous effects on society and the economy.
On the bright side, pensions, unemployment benefits and other similar government compensations contribute in bridging the gap between the haves and the have-nots. Indeed, not everyone is born equal including handicappe...
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