The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.
Given are two figures concerning fast food subject in Great Britain. The first elucidates the money expenditure on fast food nourishment per capita on a weekly basis, while the second reveals the data on how the consumption demand of fast food changed over a time frame of 20 years from 1970 to 1990. It is interesting to note that the trend of hamburger is prevailing according to the charts.
Apropos to the bar chart it is apparent that hamburger is the most prevalent meal amid high income and average income groups, as their expenses on its consumption constitute just over 40 and roughly ...
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