The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.
The graph illustrates about the percentage of mobile cellular and landlines per 100-person in several countries.
According to the data, the percentage of the land lines is the highest position (approximately 87%) in report of the data. Furthermore, following by the data, the percentage of the land lines in the Canada, the proportion of the land lines in Germany, and the percentage of the lines in UK reach 64%,60%, and 57%; moreover, the proportion of the land lines in Italy is the lower position than others. In the sameness, the proportion of the land lines in US, and the percentage of the land lines in Sweden have similar rating (approximately 67%) by per 100 people.
on the other hand, the percentage of the mobile phones is the maximum 100%. In
additional, the percentage of the mobile always increases gradually some country from Canada-to-Italy. In the contrast, the percentage of the mobile phones in Italy is the higher than the proportion of the land lines.
Clearly, the percentage of the land lines fluctuates; meanwhile, the proportion of the mobile phones grows stability in the report of the number of phones per 100 people.
the percentage of the land lines is the highest position
the percentage of the land lines is in the highest position
the proportion of the land lines in Italy is the lower position
the proportion of the land lines in Italy is in the lower position
the percentage of the mobile phones in Italy is the higher than the proportion of the land lines.
the percentage of the mobile phones in Italy is higher than that of the land lines.
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