The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries.

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The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries.

The bar graph elucidates the data on the number of cell phones and fixed line users in 6 countries of Europe and American regions. It is apparent that most of European people prefer to use of mobile phones instead of the fixed phones, whereas people living in the American regions prefers of using of the land phone.

Almost 80 to 90 percentages of cell phone users are residing in Italy, Sweden, UK and Denmark. Amongst 6 countries, the most mobile phone users are Italian as it accounts the highest usages (of 90%), whereas the highest percentages of landline users are Denmark, which is almost 90%.

There are huge differences between the percentage of mobile phone and landline used in Italy, Sweden and UK. In comparison, Denmark users show the similar percentages of cell phone and fixed phone.

The least mobile phone users are from Canada of approximately 40% and similar proportion of below 50% of mobile phone users are from US.

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people living in the American regions prefers of using of the land phone.
people living in the American regions prefer to use land phone.

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