The charts below show how selected age groups purchased concert, cinema and theatre tickets online over the first three months of 2006 in three countries and how the Internet was accessed.

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The charts below show how selected age groups purchased concert, cinema and theatre tickets online over the first three months of 2006 in three countries and how the Internet was accessed.

In these charts, the ways of buying theatre, concert, cinema tickets online over the first three months of 2006 in Australia, the UK and Malaysia and the ways of the Internet accessing are indicated.

At first, information about purchasing tickets was based on two choosen age groups: 25-44 and 65 and over. Differ from Australia and the UK, people over sixty five prevailed the other age group in buying tickets online in Malaysia.

As regards the Internet accessing ways, a desktop computer was the most used mean with the aim of buying tickets online in three countries. Moreover, a laptop was deployed in the least degree by the UK population, whereas this country was in the second place following Malaysia in utilizing a mobile phone.

In brief, though, particularly elderly preferred to purchase tickets online in Malaysia, they prevailed Australia and the UK population in using the Internet for that purpose.

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Sentence: At first, information about purchasing tickets was based on two choosen age groups: 25-44 and 65 and over.
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