foreign tourists should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions.To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

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foreign tourists should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions.
To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

In the globalization era, tourism has a big impact in countries economy. Many regions build their cultural places as main tourist destination. In term of financial income, there is difference between the price paid by local visitor and paid by foreign tourist. I partly agree that foreign tourists should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions.

Running the uniqueness and traditional places needs money. And one of source income is entrance fee which paid by all visitors. The amount money spent by tourist should be equal, even though they come outside the country. However, all people visiting the attraction spots must pay in equal amount without considering different currencies. In addition, the foreign tourist must convert their spending money into local currency. Lastly, all of collected money from entrance fees has been being allocated for running the attractions.

On the other hand, in vicinity of the traditional places, local people should pay more attention to them. It is not only about running the tourism activity, but also maintaining the preservation. And all of the cultural places should be supported by international society, in case they pay more expensive entrance ticket as their donation. Actually, this treatment has been being implemented in many countries, for example, In Taj Mahal India. Foreign tourists purchase the entrance fee more expensive than Indian people. Undoubtedly, the popularity of Taj Mahal has reached into international level. And The UNESCO (part of United Nation) awarded Taj Mahal as the international heritage place. So by paying more expensive ticket, international society has been supporting the preservation of this flourish attraction.

In conclusion, collected money from entrance fee should be managed for running the preserved place. Moreover, supporting the maintenance of cultural and historical places by international society could be reflected by donating their more expensive fee.

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