The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.

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The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.

The graph below lets us compare the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer, and the pie-chart illustrates areas where electricity is used in average English home.

According to the chart, it is clearly visible that in general, daily demand for electricity is greater in winter and changes between 30000-43000. In contrast, we cannot see the similar pattern in summer, to be more precise units of electricity become less and fluctates between 13000-21000 during summer. Furthermore, the biggest demand for electricity in England becomes in winter about 9-10 o'clo...

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Sentence: Aditionally, in typical English home people use 17.5 of eletricty for ovens, kettles which are followed by lighting processes and other electric tools.
Error: eletricty Suggestion: electricity

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