The graph illustrates unit of daily electricity consuming per hour for a period of 24 hours in winter and summer. The pie chart shows the percent of electricity consuming relating to daily using purposes.
As the graph informs, energy demanding in winter approximately is two fold of summer. There are peak hours in both curves informing in different consuming times, the amount of energy is changeable. The peak hours would take place at 2am and 22 pm in winter, however, the peak hours would happen about at 14pm and 22 pm in summer. Minimum electricity consuming is between 5am and 9am in winter and summer.
The pie chart, informs, the majority of electricity consuming is for heating rooms and heating water. 17.5 percent of electricity power is related to ovens, kettles and washing machine. However, lighting, TV and radio have similar consuming with vacuum cleaners, food mixtures and electric tools.
By considering the graph in winter time, nights become more colder than days because heating rooms would dedicate more electricity power as pie chart shows, therefore energy demand by considering other consuming devices reaches to its maximum value.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 56, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'colder' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: colder
...the graph in winter time, nights become more colder than days because heating rooms would d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26063829787 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63822816483 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558510638298 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6257283409 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246950888751 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110737312241 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641267637874 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158544330607 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530556026967 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.