the graph below shows the number of students enrolled in universities by gender within three years in country A
This graph shows the boys and the girls who registered in private or public universities within three years in country A.
It can be seen that the boys in 2001 preferred to register in public universities with a leveling off 170 and the girls who stood at 70 in public universities. However, in 2011 the boys preferred the private universities than public universities which increase to 260 and the girls preferred public universities until a rise of 210. Moreover, it will be predicted that both the boys and the girls in 2021 are still prefer the private universities with the result prediction of considerable a leveling off 500 for the boys and 600 for the girls.
Thus, in 2001 not only the boys but also the girls preferred public universities. In 2011, the boys increased in private universities and the girls increased in public universities. In 2021, it will be predicted if the boys and the girls are most considerably than before.
boys and the girls in 2021 are still prefer
boys and the girls in 2021 still prefer
Sentence: ... the private universities with the result prediction of considerable a leveling off 500 for the boys and 600 for the girls.
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