The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the percentage of elderly people aged 65 and over from 1940 and the estimation of percentage in 2040 in the USA, Japan and Sweden. Overall, the number of senior citizen is estimated to increase in 2040 among three different countries.

To begin, in 1940, Japan has the least number of elderly people with only 5 percent in comparison with the USA and Sweden, with approximately 9 percent and 7 percent respectively. For the following years the percentage of 65 years old and over dipped to just under 5 percent. Moreover, the percentage is expected to reach 10 percent in...

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