On recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company.
In your letter:
-describe the item you lost
-explain how you lost it
-tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter is to inform you about that during my recent holiday in Malaysia, Sabah. I lost my camera. The camera is a Canon XB20, which is a brand new product, professional video camera which I use to make documentary film footage. The value of the camera was $2000 and It was only 3 months old.
The camera was lost during a transfer from Hotel to another hotel, which was from Sutra Harbor to Borneo Hotel, while on holiday. When I arrived to Borneo Hotel the camera bag was not delivered with the rest of my luggage. Unfortunately, The company responsible for the luggage transfer denied all knowledge of the camera case or whereabouts.
I believe, according to the travel insurance policy I have with your company, the camera is fully covered, since I have took up a premium insurance. Please let me know what documentation you required and what procedure I need to go through in order to make the claim.
Thank you in advance for your cooperation and I hope to hear from your response soon.
Your Faithfully,
Edison.
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I am writing this letter is to inform you about that during my recent holiday in Malaysia, Sabah. I lost my camera.
I am writing this letter is to inform you that during my recent holiday in Malaysia, Sabah. I lost my camera.
flaws:
Don't use two 'which' in one sentence:
The camera is a Canon XB20, which is a brand new product, professional video camera which I use to make documentary film footage.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 10
No. of Words: 188 200
No. of Characters: 840 1000
No. of Different Words: 113 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.703 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.468 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.504 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 35 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 19 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.652 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.083 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.382 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.726 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.202 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4