The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.( IELTS BOOK 4 TEST 1)

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The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.( IELTS BOOK 4 TEST 1)

The table statistics illustrate the total percentage of distinct groups of families who were living under the poverty line in Australia in the twentieth century.

Evidently, the figures represent 11% of all households of Australian families or 1,837,000 people impoverished over the period. By comparing, the level of poverty among single aged person was higher by 6% than for the ages couple group in Australia in 1999 by 4%. Additionally, the poverty ratio was considerably lower among elderly people (aged couple). Whereas, the single parents without children were more likely to be poor...

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which was one-third as compare to a couple with children comprehensively.
which was one-third as compared to a couple with children comprehensively.

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