The graph shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five year period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart depicts expenditure on various entertainment forms in three areas with data collected between 1995 and 2000.
In general, in the given period, the money spent on entertainment witnessed an upward trend in all three regions and the United States spent the largest sum of money on this field. Regarding entertainment types, publishing and television were shown to be the most favorite.
As presented in the chart, while Asia and Europe never spent more than 150 on leisure activities in the time provided, the United States' spending on leisure forms was 184 and 257 in 1995 and 200 respectively. It is worth noticing that Europe's expenditure in 1995 was half as much as that of the United States in the same year.
With regards to the forms of entertainment, publishing and television accounted for the major parts of the resources being spent. Specifically, these two types stood for 50 out of 67 invested in Asia in 1995. Similarly, 101 out of 131 was allocated for publishing and television in Europe in 2000. In contrast, cinema, video and music received minimal interests from the public. As can be seen, these three forms combined only got a fourth of the resources that publishing and television did in the United States in 2000 with 57 and 200 respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, similarly, so, while, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90322580645 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81179260679 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3457033626 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113673037647 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445219487698 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364277508402 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741021355548 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322547670173 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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