Writing Task 1
The bar chart shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.
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The bar chart describes the total expenditure of money on six diverse items which is utilized by four nations, Germany, Italy, Britain and France. However, the overall graph trend reveals Britisher’s like to spend a significant amount of sterling on all consumer goods whereas other countries deplete less.
Distinctly, the chart figures demonstrate that, the three lavish items such as toys, photographic films and CD’s are the most optimal products in European nations. Therefore, majority of Britain residents spends £175thousand on photographic film and toys, which, is the exclusive highest amount of consumption. Secondly, Germany is the second territory that, spend £165000 to consume photographic films respectively. While, the utilization of toys and CD’s in Germany is steady by £ 155000 comprehensively.
Furthermore, by comparing France and Italy. The French people spend least cash on personal stereos, tennis racquets and perfume which is 150000 pounds approximately. Although, the toys and CD’s in France gradually increase by 159000 pounds persistently. By contrast, the Italy outlay on buying personal stereos and tennis racquets, CD’s and perfume slightly fluctuate by 1%. However, their trade in toys and photographic films are sustainable by 155000 approximately.
In short, the date of graph reckons a considerable spending on entertainment goods in four European regions.
six diverse items which is utilized by four nations,
six diverse items which are utilized by four nations,
Sentence: However, the overall graph trend reveals Britisher's like to spend a significant amount of sterling on all consumer goods whereas other countries deplete less.
Description: The word like is not usually used as an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to like
on photographic film and toys, which, is the exclusive highest amount of consumption.
on photographic film and toys, which, are the exclusive highest amount of consumption.
Germany is the second territory that, spend £165000
Germany is the second territory that spends £165000
The French people spend least cash on personal stereos, tennis racquets and perfume which is 150000 pounds approximately.
The French people spend least cash on personal stereos, tennis racquets and perfumes which are 150000 pounds approximately.
their trade in toys and photographic films are sustainable by 155000 approximately.
their trades in toys and photographic films are sustainable by 155000 approximately.
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 10
No. of Words: 207 200
No. of Characters: 1147 1000
No. of Different Words: 120 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.793 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.541 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.961 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 93 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 71 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.372 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.357 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.594 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.035 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4